Spring 2000: Text Encoding & Website Development Kevin Hawkins (http://www.wam.umd.edu/~khawkins/) eriC White (whitee@wam.umd.edu) We marked up version HB74a (http://jefferson.village.virginia.edu/dickinson/safe/hb74a.html) of the poem on the syn (breath group) level rather than by line and line groups. We felt that Dickinson used dashes to separate salient ideas rather than line breaks. She tended to break lines when she ran out of space, not necessarily because the thought was finished. Here’s the key: = a lg, which includes syns = a syn (breath group), which is followed by a dash by default or another character if noted with "end=". Utterances may contain words, line breaks, and words in the vocative (). = a word = a word not capitalized in Standard English but capitalized by Dickinson
= a line break = a noun in the vocative form = a signature, which has nothing following it by default but may be if specified by "end=" ----- safeintheiralabasterchambers
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anduntouchedbynoon
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the resurrection
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stone
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crescent
abovethem
worldsscooptheirarcs
andfirmaments row
diadems drop anddoges
surrender
soundlessasdots ona
discofsnow
perhapsthisversewould
pleaseyoubetter
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