Spring 2000: Text Encoding & Website Development
Kevin Hawkins (http://www.wam.umd.edu/~khawkins/)
eriC White (whitee@wam.umd.edu)
We marked up version HB74a (http://jefferson.village.virginia.edu/dickinson/safe/hb74a.html)
of the poem on the syn (breath group) level rather than
by line and line groups. We felt that Dickinson used dashes to
separate salient ideas rather than line breaks. She tended to
break lines when she ran out of space, not necessarily because
the thought was finished. Here’s the key:
= a lg, which includes syns
= a syn (breath group), which is followed by a dash
by default or another character if noted with "end=". Utterances
may contain words, line breaks, and words in the vocative ().
= a word
= a word not capitalized in Standard English but capitalized
by Dickinson
= a line break
= a noun in the vocative form
= a signature, which has nothing following it by default
but may be if specified by "end="
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safeintheiralabasterchambers
untouchedbymorning
anduntouchedbynoon
liethemeekmembersof
the
resurrection
rafterofsatin
androofof
stone
grandgotheyears
inthe
crescent
abovethem
worldsscooptheirarcs
andfirmaments
row
diadems
drop
anddoges
surrender
soundlessasdots
ona
discofsnow
perhapsthisversewould
pleaseyoubetter
Sue
Emily