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Manuscript transcription
Dickinson's Suggested Alterations
It might be worthwhile to demonstrate the profound impact of editing upon
the meaning of Dickinson's poem. To cite one example, in Bianchi and Hampson's
1929 version of the poem, the last line of what would have been the second
stanza reads "So I write Poets - All." In the manuscript, the line has two
additional dashes and no period: "So I write - Poets - All -" By placing
the dash between "So I write" and "Poets," Dickinson is forcing her audience
to recognize the material practice of her writing ("So I write") and the
fact that she herself is among the "Poets" she is identifying. By implicating
herself in the textual process on these multiple levels, Dickinson is
simultaneously placing herself above God (in the second and third stanza)
and commenting on the futility of her enterprise (in the fourth stanza).
In Bianchi and Hampson's version, Dickinson appears to be addressing all
of these issues from a comfortable distance. |
I reckon - when I count |
Other -/ final Disclose to - Trust in/Ask of - |